NS121 |
Human Biology:
Selected Topics in Medicine |
Name of Writer_____________________________
Name of Editor _______________________
Please use the following categories to help you in editing the other
students paper. Be specific in your comments. Write corrections/comments
on the paper, as well.
Writer: save this sheet and hand in with the second
draft;
you will be evaluated on your editing as well as your writing.
Does the opening make the purpose of the
study clear? If not, explain what is confusing.
Is it clear what was done in the study?
Are the results described in sufficient detail?
Is there a clear overall shape to the paper?--beginning, middle,
end?
What was the one best part of the paper and why?
What one aspect or section would you most like to see improved?
Grammar, punctuation, etc...
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